- Does the writer hold your attention through a long article? If she does, how did she do it? If not, why?
No. It’s too long that I don’t understand it much. Not suitable for readers who can’t stand reading very long articles, like myself.
- Quote the most vivid and vigorous sentences in this feature.
“They hated me.” The insurgents were testing the new captain, he suspected, by deliberately shooting from homes.
The soldiers don’t hesitate to call in Big Daddy (who, in today’s military, often flies in with the voice of a female pilot). But while these flying war machines are saviors to the soldiers, they cannot distinguish between insurgents and civilians.
- Write this feature as straight news, 100 words maximum.
Note: To be quite frank, I really don’t know much about this article…
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Checked, posted on time - Prof. Jorge
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